Research+Draft

Arrianna Sawyer Professor Hartman =**English 103 **= =**November 1, 2010 **= = **Should tobacco be banned? ** = = = = = **Tobacco is in cigarettes and they put harmful things into the cigarettes. The reason that tobacco have not been banned is because Tobacco companys hire their own reseachers for going over their product. They pay the researchers a lot of money to say that it is okay to use their product. Of course a company is going to do that, when they still want to make money. **
 * Should the government ban tobacco just like any other harmful drugs? I am going to analyze why some believe that tobacco should be banned. Also I am going analyze why tobacco should still be legal. Some people say that tobacco is harmful to the body. Others say that people have a choice into what we put into our bodies. But if something is harmful to our body, we should ban the harmful substance right? **

OBSERVATION - Introduction part is smooth and good. We can know what she will talk about later in her research paper. INTERPRETATION - I am not sure whether writer is positive or not about the tobacco banning. EVALUATION - I can't evaluate yet. But introduction part is good. DIALOGUE - If writer has enough material it will be a good research paper. n - Minkyung Jung