NRypel+Statement+of+Purpose

My open letter is going to be addressed to the American Society about their adherence to political parties. My audience will be every person that has an impact on American politics. I'm hoping to show the negative effects that come from a party system. I'm not asking everybody to get rid of their party, just not to be defined by it.

MSH: This sounds good, but I want you to be more specific in who you address your letter to. "The American Society" is too broad.