Ryan+Law+StatementofPurpose

I want athletes to understand that they are role models to young children and that they can't get away with everything they do in the public eye. I want athletes to realize that the law applies to them and that they will always be in the public eye. They need to act more professional. I am writing to every professional athlete and I'd like them to respond by standing up and taking responsibility for their actions. If they commit a crime, they need to be created like everyone else.

MSH: Good topic. Addressing athletes is the right approach if you want to tell them to clean up their act. If you want to write about how they aren't treated like everyone else, you might want to address the people who give them a free pass instead of the athletes themselves.