ArriannaMemoirReflection

The teacher called me to write.It took me two days to pick what I was going to write about. Because my other story wasnt what I wanted to go with. So I changed the entire story. My exploration involved some critical thinking :) I was pretty sure the readers could relate to my story, because I'm dealing with rude guest and helping guest. It was kind of hard to think of a story. I do a lot of target stories and i couldnt decide which one. I made only two revisions to my story.I got good feedback. Because it was kind of hard to follow which girl it was going to the restroom and which girl was ordering the pop. So basically I needed more clarity. When I did my revisions i did it after my working draft. I did all my planning for my writing in my head. I didnt talk about others about my idea. I didnt really proofread the final revision because everything else was fine because i went I only changed certain things in the story.

At first it took some time to think of a story, but relatively it was easy process. There is really nothing I would change or do different.